tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2825245145099995948.post166921580152222597..comments2023-06-07T09:45:26.441+01:00Comments on CANDY FLAME YEAH: Better!Phandyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06802011860190038940noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2825245145099995948.post-67484083490313411832009-08-31T13:21:02.330+01:002009-08-31T13:21:02.330+01:00Ah crap I hate dells. It just ate my comment. Luck...Ah crap I hate dells. It just ate my comment. Lucky for you I'll do it again 'cause I'm just awesome like that.<br /><br />Ok, in terms of composition and clarity your second go at the image works much better then your first, its simple, moody and aestetically lovely, I can easily appreciate the broad strokes that make up the forms as technically beautiful. <br /><br />However its very composed, posed even. You've lost a lot of the sense of character and immedicay of your first roughs, where it felt more as if we were moving in a real place with purpose and intent. More like a urgent-if-poorly-composed photograph of a real event. I have a lot of apprication for an image that'll make me believe it, rather then be simply beautiful and correct.. so while its very subjective opinion I hope you can see what I mean.Fayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17911765675861897568noreply@blogger.com